martes, 30 de noviembre de 2010

Writing of the photo

In this photo there are some clouds that show a beautiful sky. Although it is the same sky for everyone, it is something different for me and each one of us. Sometimes there are days that I feel sad and the thing that I like to do is to see the sky since it makes me feel something that I do not know how to explain. There are some people who say that some day they will be there with God and with many beloved relatives that has passed away. But, what this picture really means? In my opinion, it represents peace and quietness because of the water that we can see there.

Moreover, the form of the clouds expresses softness and kindness and those are things that nowadays only  few people know what actually are. This should not be like that due to, if we as human beings do not help each others, where are we going then? and what we really want for our future and the next generations? Any person who thinks like me could say that this photograph could makes some people to consider that at the present time we do need peace, because it is through it we can obtain  and do everything. Besides, we can achieve the unity between many countries and we can stop the violence and the evil that are governing our world.

Exercises of paraphrasing

Excercise 1

Paraphase each sentence. There may be more than one way to rewrite each one. Remenber to change vocabulary, phrases and sentence structure wherever you can.


  1. Despite their massive size, elephants are known for being agile.

Although big mamals like elephants have a huge size they are very smart.


  1. Because elephants consume up to 500 pounds of food a day, they are able to strip a forest bare in no time.

Elephants can destroy plants very fast due to they eat a lot.


  1. Over the centuries, lions have been used in art to represent power and magnificence.

In art, lions are being used for many years in order to mean force and purity.


  1. Lions are social animals with one dominant male in each pride.

Lions are known as communicative animals that are organized into groups with a male boss in each one of them.


  1. George Washington Carver was a dedicated teacher, in addition, he was known as a talented artist, musician, and researcher who made valuable contributions to his people and his country.

George Washington Carver was a poliphacetic teacher who helped his nation and persons from there through important actions and decisions.


  1. Archibald McLeish, known for his poetry, was appointed head of the library of congress by President Roosevelt in 1939.

In 1939, president Roosevelt decided to chose an excellent poet whose name is Archibald McLeish for being in charge of the library of congress.





Excesice 2

Read each paragraph and state the main idea in your own words. If you find the main idea stated directly in the paragraph, be sure to use the paraphrasing techniches that you practice in exersice one.

  1. There is plenty of water on the earth. In fact, ther is enouhg water in this planet for everyone to have a huge lake. The troubleis that the water is not always found in the place where is needed. In addition much of the water is polluted or salty. Because of these problems, there are many people without sufficient water.

Main idea: The water’s problem because it is never found in the place where is needed.

  1. New oil supplies need to be found to replace those that have been used up. There is a constant search for new oil fields. Oil hunters sink their wells wherever there are signs of oil. Each of these drillings costs thousands and thousands of dollars, and often there is not enough oil to make it profitable. Nevertheless, the search for new oil never ends.

Main idea: Old oil supplies have to be replace because of many reasons, that is why we need to look for them frequently.

  1. Quakers, a religious group known as the Society of Friends, have always worke for human causes. Before the Civil War in the United States, they werw against slavery and led the movement to help salve escape from the southern part of the United States and seek freedom in the northern part, today, they fight hunger and disease around the globe and still aid people fleeing tyranny and war. Their beliefs are based on the principles of pacifism and simple living.

Main idea: Quakers who is a religous group of friends is always working for problems of the humanity.

Exercise 3

Summary of 100 words of the text Student Rights.

Students should have rights in any university due to nowadays they never have a say in issues such as faculty selection, curriculum planning and sheduling. The major issue is that never in this university have students been permitted to interview to examine the credential of, or even meet prospective professors. Besides, we attend classes from Monday to Friday and even on Saturdays and we know what we have to learn to be successfull people. For these reasons, Students have to deal with scheduling and curriculum planning process since it is something that affect directly our lives.

domingo, 7 de noviembre de 2010

Finding the main idea

The answer to this question is the main idea. The Main idea refers to what a paragraph or an article is about. "Main" means what is important, or key, the heart of the matter. "Idea" means the thought, the thesis or the topic.
 If you want to read more see (Finding the main idea)

A Definition of Topic

A topic is the main organizing principle of a discussion, either verbal or written. Topics offer us an occasion for speaking or writing and a focus which governs what we say. They are the subject matter of our conversations, and the avenues by which we arrive at other subjects of conversations. Consider, for instance, a recent class discussion. Although your instructor determined what topic you discussed initially, some students probably asked questions that led to other topics. As the subjects of our discussions lead to related subjects, so do the topics we write about lead to related topics in our academic studies. However, unlike the verbal conversations we have, each individual piece of writing we produce usually focuses on a single topic. Most effective writers learn that when they present a well-defined, focused, and developed topic, they do a better job of holding their readers' attention and presenting appropriate information than if they had not attempted to place boundaries on the subject of their writing.

References:
- Writing@CSU (A Definition of Topic)
- Wikipedia (Topic Article
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