martes, 30 de noviembre de 2010

Writing of the photo

In this photo there are some clouds that show a beautiful sky. Although it is the same sky for everyone, it is something different for me and each one of us. Sometimes there are days that I feel sad and the thing that I like to do is to see the sky since it makes me feel something that I do not know how to explain. There are some people who say that some day they will be there with God and with many beloved relatives that has passed away. But, what this picture really means? In my opinion, it represents peace and quietness because of the water that we can see there.

Moreover, the form of the clouds expresses softness and kindness and those are things that nowadays only  few people know what actually are. This should not be like that due to, if we as human beings do not help each others, where are we going then? and what we really want for our future and the next generations? Any person who thinks like me could say that this photograph could makes some people to consider that at the present time we do need peace, because it is through it we can obtain  and do everything. Besides, we can achieve the unity between many countries and we can stop the violence and the evil that are governing our world.

2 comentarios:

  1. The construction of the writing is great. Nevertheless, it would be good if you add the photo you are describing.

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  2. Dear Graciela,

    The ideas are great, but there are some grammar elements you should review, for example: beloved relatives that has, should be "have".

    Good job.

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